my math game

Today i play this new game that my teacher told  me to do this morning on the math time.

T4 W1 Tuesday /Wednesday

walt: write a persuasive letter.

Purpose: To convince/persuade .

Success Criteria for opening paragraph

1. Title
2. I started with a question.   Should...

1. I stated my point of view clearly in the introduction.  I think…..
2. I backed my argument with evidence and detail.

Dear Mr Hendriks

Introduction reduced , lunch time , shorten

Paragraph 2 Fun activity

Paragraph 3 more time with my friend

Paragraph 4

conclusion

Dear Mr Hendricks

Should we shorten our lunch time ?

I think that  we should shorten our  lunch time for only half an hour sox

we could  go home early. My reason a we shorten our lunch time so we  can

go home and do more fun activity and spend more time with our famil

and our friend too.  

If you shorten the lunch time i wil got more time to play with my friend

and my family also.

maori myth narrative

WALT:  Write an impactful introduction to our maori myth.

Success Criteria

I will be successful if I can..........

1. Follow the structure for a narrative.
2. Use  a few Maori words in my writing.
3. Write in correct paragraphs. ( check topic sentence)
4. Use correct punctuation.
5. Use a variety of sentences. ( simple, compound, complex)

One windy day Jeff the maori went to the Tarawera forest. Jeff  was a tough man and he  went to Tarawera so he could pull the sun down to the earth. So the sun could become  his friend. The Tarawera forest have too many kiwi their but you cannot see it because they only come out at night and sometimes they run too fast. The Tarawera forest also have tall trees and it have green leaves.

Jeff fights the sun because Jeff want the sun to come to the earth so the sun could be Jeff’s friend. But the sun doesn't want to be Jeff’s friend that way Jeff can’t pull the sun down to the earth. Jeff the maori pull it heart but the sun was still strong. They keep on fighting until

my math

Be kind

My Samoan art

Mrs Ramkolowan our teacher always greeting in samoan to us when she take the roll.

Every day we have to finish our art and we learn some of the samoan word.

pufferfish

 

Accord to scientists the pufferfish is one of ten most weird and wondrous life. forms scientists have discovered a new species of pufferfish along the coast of  japan. This is  the only species which  make the geometric patterns in the nest to attract females.

The pufferfish is look like the marine fish.  The mouth is looks like a beak. The pufferfish also puffs up when threatened.

The thing that the puffer fish eat is mussels,clams,shellfish creatures in the sea.