maori myth narrative

WALT:  Write an impactful introduction to our maori myth.

Success Criteria

I will be successful if I can..........

1. Follow the structure for a narrative.
2. Use  a few Maori words in my writing.
3. Write in correct paragraphs. ( check topic sentence)
4. Use correct punctuation.
5. Use a variety of sentences. ( simple, compound, complex)

One windy day Jeff the maori went to the Tarawera forest. Jeff  was a tough man and he  went to Tarawera so he could pull the sun down to the earth. So the sun could become  his friend. The Tarawera forest have too many kiwi their but you cannot see it because they only come out at night and sometimes they run too fast. The Tarawera forest also have tall trees and it have green leaves.

Jeff fights the sun because Jeff want the sun to come to the earth so the sun could be Jeff’s friend. But the sun doesn't want to be Jeff’s friend that way Jeff can’t pull the sun down to the earth. Jeff the maori pull it heart but the sun was still strong. They keep on fighting until