T4 W1 Tuesday /Wednesday

walt: write a persuasive letter.

Purpose: To convince/persuade .

Success Criteria for opening paragraph

1. Title
2. I started with a question.   Should...

1. I stated my point of view clearly in the introduction.  I think…..
2. I backed my argument with evidence and detail.

Dear Mr Hendriks

Introduction reduced , lunch time , shorten

Paragraph 2 Fun activity

Paragraph 3 more time with my friend

Paragraph 4

conclusion

Dear Mr Hendricks

Should we shorten our lunch time ?

I think that  we should shorten our  lunch time for only half an hour sox

we could  go home early. My reason a we shorten our lunch time so we  can

go home and do more fun activity and spend more time with our famil

and our friend too.  

If you shorten the lunch time i wil got more time to play with my friend

and my family also.